Blood Tears Poem by Randay Darling

Blood Tears



my tears of blood fall to the earth beneath me
i cant but help to think about the memories you left behind

i fall to my knees beacuse im weak with out you
you sucked me dry of my emotions and i cant help but to live off of yours

every waking moment i know your with her
i cant help but to scream your name to the world
those memories we made hold no price value

now that im under the shade of that tree
on my hands and knees with blood tears
all i can see is the past and all i can live for is the present
i feel no future

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 08 February 2009

Oh what a tragic description this is! I really felt this one. A very good writing. Special! I don't like the line splits very much, but that is a preference. All in all, a good one. GW62

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Randay Darling

Randay Darling

Franfurt, Hessen, Germany
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