Wednesday, April 1, 2020

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Burning flames, painting his existence on canvas,
Heart perceiving the pattern with shattered sight,
Refractive errors leaving an imprint of heartache,
Moment by moment, tears racing down the road.
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Aqib Javid Bhat
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Jazib Kamalvi 10 June 2020

Write comment. Such a nice poem, Aqib. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Dr Antony Theodore 10 June 2020

Moment by moment, tears racing down the road. The sun reminds me of thy splendidly luminous soul, And the starry night sky of thy beautiful heart. Eyes gazing at the sky, , my garden of peace. very fine poetic lines expressing a world of emotions. tony

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