Breaking Poem by drew floyd

Breaking



i can barely feel my arms
how do you expect me to feel your palms
your blinded by the wicked sadistic charm
of the sly crooked demon with bulging arms
i laid awake on my nest
on a never ending occurring rest
how much i long for my escape
not far now before i finally break
peers rush to learn whats on my mind
but in the end gets left behind
i see the world threw my own eyes
not by the echo of the media dirty lies
i fear for the looming generation
an atheist asking for salvation

Wednesday, November 28, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: sadistic
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
before anyone think this is an anti government poem its not the 12th line i just threw in there. The poem is just 14 lines of topics really that been on my mine. every 2 lines are just base off what i been going threw or thinking about for example first two lines are about people asking me for help but i can barely help myself...just hope you enjoy it
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anita Sehgal 28 November 2012

well written... enjoyed the views.. the last two lines are great!

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