Saturday, September 16, 2006

Breathe Comments

Rating: 4.5

As you lie here next to me
and I listen to you breathe
I can't help but think 'Am I really free? '
Does love hold you back
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Haley Nicole
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Steve Hagget 16 September 2006

Very passionate writing and I enjoy it. Very different to my own and I like your style of poetry very much, Steve

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Nina Solomon 16 September 2006

nice poem again. i like your poems' topics.

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