Breeze And Longing Poem by Happy Place

Breeze And Longing



For the man that I chosen
Leave many in disbelieved
Not because of his stunning looks
Nor because he is successful
I fall for the man beyond the exterior

Though our journey may not always be blissful
And sometimes we acted like a fool
I guess that's what makes life beautiful
for this I will always be grateful

This roads once was very familiar
We both met half way to see each other
It used to be cheery
But now felt so empty
Only left the sound of caressing breeze
Making this path feel emptier than it is

Tears in my eyes I wont let it flow
Because I know soon you will be here
So I let the wind carry away my longing
Hope it will take it to you
I'm happy to have someone to miss
Someone like you...

Sunday, October 12, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
it was 3pm and it was bright outside. i took a short walk on my familiar path just to get some fresh air. i feel so sluggish these days. you were gone for almost a week. I miss you but i cannot tell you. this path felt too empty i could even hear the sound of the moving dried leave being swept away by the wind. i have this habit of sending all the longing i had for you to the wind. it is my way of sending you an open love letter. makes me feel much better. i was smiling by myself when the thoughts of you echoed in my head, the time where we walked on this path that day...
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