Breezy Gal Poem by AtreyaSarma Uppaluri

Breezy Gal

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The bouncy gal breezed
into the teeming train.

Hypnotised
the standing crowd
instantly pulled back
and lined up in two rows.

They cleared the way
and let her in
sweetly hoping
that the wind
would blow in generously
and waft her 'pallu' around
to kiss their desires.

{PALLU (a Hindi word originating from Sanskrit ‘Pallavi’) : the loose end of the Indian sari (or saree) that flows over the shoulder from across the bust line and dangles at the back.}

[Feb 19,2009: : Hyderabad – 500 056]

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 14 October 2009

a naughty write...lovely...

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 10 October 2009

How lovely written in this breezy way - well done. Thanks for the smile :) - Cindy

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Mubeen Sadhika 10 October 2009

beautiful poem. nice narration. good thought.

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AtreyaSarma Uppaluri

AtreyaSarma Uppaluri

Hyderabad, AP, India
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