Broken Poem by Kyle Doucette

Broken



In a field of broken trees and hearts lays a boy with a broken past. While his life less body just laying there looking in the sky.
A girl comes by.
With her heart broken in two.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
L G 27 January 2008

I like it even though it's really short, but it says a lot. I think it would be better if it says 'A girl comes by, with her heart broken too.': D

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