Broken Poem by Lizelle 'Leasel' Martins

Broken

Rating: 4.5


I Love You
Will Always do
But I am broken

Things have changed
We are drifting apart
And its breaking me
Into a thousand pieces

We have been through storms
And have always been okay
But why does this all seem too much
For us to be okay
By our storms
My storms
Are suffocating me
Crushing me

Do I need a break
A break from You
A break from Us
Will the that help? ? ? ?
Heal this brokenness I am feeling.....

I am broken

Tuesday, February 24, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: heartbroken
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 24 February 2015

Love is a spiritual experience that affects us profoundly, its effects linger even after the source of stimulation is gone. It needs careful nurturing to maintain its bliss. However, it's worth nothing that love is also whimsical and temperamental, it comes unannounced and may leave without warning. I like the articulation and penning of the poem as it captured feelings from the inner recesses of your heart. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Lizelle 'Leasel' Martins

Lizelle 'Leasel' Martins

Johannesburg, South Africa
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