Tuesday, April 18, 2017

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I loved you
And I thought you loved me
But you didn't and I was broken
My life was like a rainbow
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Alma Da. Bear
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Ducky Person 19 April 2017

thank you very much but this is an old poem that I wrote when I was in 5th grade. So again i thank u for the compliments.

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Chinedu Dike 18 April 2017

An insightful depiction of tragedy in the bliss of love - a good portrayal of the whimsical and temperamental nature of love as manifested in disappointment and heartbreak. Thanks for sharing Alma and welcome to Poemhunter.

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Alma Da. Bear

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