Thursday, July 17, 2008

Broken Angel Comments

Rating: 4.8

I lay there clenching my stomach
you look at me with your only friend vodka in your hand
you look at me your trying to break me your anger welds up
inside you, you frown you know I'm an angel that can never break
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~ Jon London ~ 31 July 2008

Wonderful raw emotion, so much that it drips off the page.....excellent piece best wishes Jon

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