Broken Hearts Poem by Bernadette Rushfirth

Broken Hearts

Rating: 5.0


I listen to the beat,
the beat of a heart,
each tender thud sounding so far apart.
Will he awake or will he be still?
we all know this illness can kill.
He used to be so happy so far from gloom,
if only our love would help him bloom.
He'll break the shell and emerge with wings,
his body wont fight but drawn to the light.
His spirit will rise with all pure thoughts,
never again will he be distraught.
Our love will never die always to be pure,
how long will he last? nobody's sure.
Life is everything that's what he used to say,
only yesterday did it change to I'll be gone someday.
We will prey every night always remember,
those few nights in mid December.
All by the loved ones who cared the most,
easter to Christmas cutting the roast.
Deep in our souls,
the bottom of our hearts,
we all loved him to bits right from the start.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Neil Marsden 17 October 2008

Stunning sad and poignant piece of quality writing straight from the heart! Well done! Neil.

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M.A. C. 06 June 2008

This is such a sad poem.....but it is very good. I give it a 10. And so you know: my prayers are with the person whom this poem was about as well (even if I don't know him or you) .

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Bernadette Rushfirth

Bernadette Rushfirth

Birmingham, England
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