Friday, June 6, 2008

Broken Hearts Comments

Rating: 5.0

I listen to the beat,
the beat of a heart,
each tender thud sounding so far apart.
Will he awake or will he be still?
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Bernadette Rushfirth
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Neil Marsden 17 October 2008

Stunning sad and poignant piece of quality writing straight from the heart! Well done! Neil.

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M.A. C. 06 June 2008

This is such a sad poem.....but it is very good. I give it a 10. And so you know: my prayers are with the person whom this poem was about as well (even if I don't know him or you) .

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Bernadette Rushfirth

Bernadette Rushfirth

Birmingham, England
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