Monday, March 9, 2009

Broken Leash (Song) Comments

Rating: 4.0

Tied up with knots that won’t unwind
Fed up with cruel dreams acting kind

Not ready to jump but I wont look down
...
Read full text

annie tuck
COMMENTS
Mark R Slaughter 11 March 2009

Again, a nice display of metaphors. Might want to check some of the spellings to enhance the presentation. Mark

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success