Tuesday, June 14, 2011

Broken Life Of Dreams Comments

Rating: 5.0

The anger came, and the wind blew
Tigers roar and the mountains trembled
The cubs cried and lost their life
Tears are shed and then ignored
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Marianne Keplinger
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without a name Face 14 June 2011

I love the use of metaphores! ! ! Putting a picture into peopples heads about somehting they know about and bringing it into feelings. I love the use of it and your poetry is beautifully layed out.

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Marianne Keplinger

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