Broken Promises Poem by Amao Williams Praise

Broken Promises

Rating: 5.0


BROKEN PROMISES

Hopping, walking on broken promises;
Stale promises flew helplessly in the air.
Diving, swimming in a bloody ocean;
Stabbed with a 'daguar' of envy and jealousy.
Running, jogging on the streets of hatred;
Streets filled with futile zombies.
Riding, driving with passengers of shattered dreams;
Vehicles labelled with 'broken oaths'.
Soaring, flying with birds of disappointment;
Unsuitable atmospheric air tossed to and fro.

Broken promises...
Shattered dreams...
Scars not to be forgotten...
Deep pains from within...
Massacred promises...
Butchered dreams...
Killings of egos not to be forgotten...
Deep memories from within...
These promises are vague!
Broken promises indeed!

©Willipraise

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fabrizio Frosini 30 September 2016

just sent you a msg.. it's about an invitation

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Partha Pratim Goswami 30 September 2016

Great representation of grief 'broken promises'.Thanx for sharing

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Colin Coplin 29 September 2016

A wonderful poem Ameo. Full of imagery and well crafted words. Thank you

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