Broken Sky Poem by Allison Unknown

Broken Sky

Rating: 3.5


Walking down
Death row
Looking up
Into the sky
Wondering
When I can go
From this place
Called home
Something is wrong
The sky
Is broken into two
One side is black
The other side
Is white
I wonder why
The sky
Is broken into two
I look down
To see the faces
Of men who'll die
Before me
I look up
Back to see the sky
All one color now
Its black

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tristan Maverick 30 November 2009

I quite enjoy the format of this one. You say a lot within a small space. It's impressive to me.

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Joseph Poewhit 26 November 2009

Eerie words of feeling

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