Deana(Felicia) Dotterweich

Broken Token - Poem by Deana(Felicia) Dotterweich

Spinning, Swirling,
Round and Round.
My mind is twirling,
I fall to the ground.
My heart is broken,
I am weak.
I’m not your special token,
I'm not the one you seek.

Comments about Broken Token by Deana(Felicia) Dotterweich

  • ~Deana ~ Dotterweich (2/28/2012 10:37:00 AM)

    thank you :) (Report) Reply

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  • Michael Williams (2/27/2012 2:55:00 AM)

    Verry good poem. You brought the feeling of life spinning that love gives me, you did well. (Report) Reply

  • ~Deana ~ Dotterweich (2/1/2012 10:51:00 AM)

    I am Fully German :) my grandma came to America when she was little (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 26, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, February 1, 2012

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