Broken Token Poem by Deana(Felicia) Dotterweich

Broken Token

Rating: 4.3
 


Spinning, Swirling,
Round and Round.
My mind is twirling,
I fall to the ground.
My heart is broken,
I am weak.
I’m not your special token,
I'm not the one you seek.

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~Deana ~ Dotterweich 28 February 2012

thank you :)

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Michael Williams 27 February 2012

Verry good poem. You brought the feeling of life spinning that love gives me, you did well.

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~Deana ~ Dotterweich 01 February 2012

I am Fully German :) my grandma came to America when she was little

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