Broken Wings Poem by Ozie James

Broken Wings

Rating: 5.0


Can't fly when I try the odds seemed stacked against my success
Have I failed after giving it all I've got or have I not givin it my best
Can't fly when i try I notice a change in my surroundings
Or is it a change in me cause when I look around Im still grounded
Can't fly but as I try the clouds begin to turn to clear sky
Giving vision and clarity to my minds eye
Can't fly but as i try doors begin to open
In places I wasn't even hoping
Can't fly but as i try I gain strength wisdom and courage
To move forward not just to get by
Can't fly but as I try work is done
The battle isn't over but the first fight is won

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 09 July 2011

Marvellous poem written with great skill. Rich in imagery and emotions. I liked and rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'ABORTION' on page 4.

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Ozie James

Ozie James

Milledgeville Ga.
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