Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Rookie - 13 Points (Bahraich, U.P. India)

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I am Mohd. Akmal Nazir. I am the resident of mohalla Quazipura, Bahraich. I am the eldest son of my parents. My father late Mr. Mohd. Nazir Khan was a teacher in a local interermediate college. My mother Mrs. Shahida Begum is a house wife. I have two younger brothers(Athar Nazir and Arshad Nazir) and two younger sisters(Mrs. Rehana Salman and Irfana) . My brother-in-law Salman Ali ... more »

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  • Nick Krakana (7/17/2011 9:39:00 AM)

    Like this, simple and true, always rings through......NK

  • Alex 'The Poet' (A.T.P.) Lushaba (6/23/2011 7:41:00 AM)

    Well said poet..Great words....You know I rated it 9 because I was eager to get just one last sentence, but you denied(smiling) ..great my poet...I love it so much... I have already taken it for a frame in my room with the last part saying ' By: Mohd. Akmal Nazir....'

  • Chris Darlington (6/23/2011 3:42:00 AM)

    some strong stuff in these poems

  • Linda Patino (6/21/2011 11:00:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem..I loved it. I will gladly read more of your poems..Thank you for your nice comment on mine.

  • Deejay Manaleng Deejay Manaleng (6/13/2011 9:10:00 AM)

    A humble complaint indeed it is....11 out of 10 love the 'thorns on my lips'

  • Hribhu Dey (6/12/2011 9:04:00 AM)

    Varied subjects come to be foregrounded...personal experiences graduate into acquiring a universal value...luv reading your poem.

  • Mohammad Akmal Nazir (6/6/2011 1:46:00 AM)

    Audrey Heller (Miami United States; Female; 79)
     To: Mohd. Akmal Nazir
     Date Time: 4/2/2011 7: 57: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)
     Subject: My Poems
    Thank you, so very much for you wonderful critiques. I'm very pleased indeed, in how you feel about my work. I did go and read, several of your new poems and I must say, you too, do a great job. We write differently, but you're very deep! I thank you, for sharing your work with me and I hope you'll continue toread mine, whenever you can!
    Audrey Heller

  • Denvor Fernandez (6/4/2011 9:42:00 AM)

    Interesting poems always come as a stream of thoughts

  • inayr (6/1/2011 6:39:00 AM)

    Very good, mohd, i gave it 10
    wanting a word of kindness but recieving cold harshness

  • Vana22 Mashelkar (5/15/2011 2:58:00 AM)

    gosh your poem revives all the feelings...
    too expressive! ! !
    thanks for rating mine 10
    10 to u toooo

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Best Poem of Mohammad Akmal Nazir

*a Humble Complaint*

You could have been more polite observing me,
Your harsh words have left
An indelible impression,
Hatred can be won by love alone,
As one gets relief from
Scorching heat
By gentle rain,
As the sermon of a saint soothes
The disturbed mind,
Your words could have healed
The wounds of my heart,
For once you touched me, felt me,
And covered your being with my love,
As you said,
You smelt my love and called it red rose,
What's happened now?
Thorns have grown on my lips,
My being has become the grave of your hatred,
Is it a ...

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