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Beautiful lines ..

Like this, simple and true, always rings through......NK

Well said poet..Great words....You know I rated it 9 because I was eager to get just one last sentence, but you denied(smiling) ..great my poet...I love it so much... I have already taken it for a frame in my room with the last part saying ' By: Mohd. Akmal Nazir....'

some strong stuff in these poems

Beautiful poem..I loved it. I will gladly read more of your poems..Thank you for your nice comment on mine.

A humble complaint indeed it is....11 out of 10 love the 'thorns on my lips'

Varied subjects come to be foregrounded...personal experiences graduate into acquiring a universal value...luv reading your poem.

Audrey Heller (Miami United States; Female; 79)  To: Mohd. Akmal Nazir  Date Time: 4/2/2011 7: 57: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)  Subject: My Poems Thank you, so very much for you wonderful critiques. I'm very pleased indeed, in how you feel about my work. I did go and read, several of your new poems and I must say, you too, do a great job. We write differently, but you're very deep! I thank you, for sharing your work with me and I hope you'll continue toread mine, whenever you can! Audrey Heller

Interesting poems always come as a stream of thoughts

Very good, mohd, i gave it 10 wanting a word of kindness but recieving cold harshness

gosh your poem revives all the feelings... too expressive! ! ! thanks for rating mine 10 10 to u toooo

excellent work great poem.........i am rating it 9

A poet Genius.have a very unique talent.i love it 100+

This is a modern poet who has also space for the ancient thought. His poems are the mirror of the surroundings and the current affairs. So far as the language is concern, it is too easy for a secondary class student to understand. The poems are concised but bear great meaning, and they also leave impression upon the people who read them.