Brother Poem by Neethi (10 Aug 1990)

Brother



Your moist eyes simply blink
at the emerald stretch,
as my culpable ones
diffidently shift.

Your chiseled smile exudes
shrouded consternation.
My face – tinted crimson –,
bury in my palms.

Your hand – black, blue and red –,
holds my unblemished one.
The other ready to
catch my secret tears.

Your nobleness seems to
scoff at my cowardice.
Your frayed clothes ridicule
my ragged being.

Piercing my ears
is the booming silence,
which blares out chapters of
your courteousness.

A thousand times over,
I wished being your vestige.
And a thousand times more,
I wished you were dead.
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(In reference to The Kite Runner.)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shyam Balaji 09 April 2009

hey neethi! ! ! ... am born just 2 months before u! ! ! >..counld not understand anything..wot a vocabulary...gr8...pls add oxford dictionary links..! ! ! >...am just a beginner..ur an expert i feel...anyways...read ma poems and comment on them too.! ! ! ...bye.

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Er Dr Pradeep Kumar Mohanty 16 November 2008

Neethi- Which class do u read in? U write so nicely at this tender age. Good Going. Bod bless u.

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