Friday, October 24, 2008

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Your moist eyes simply blink
at the emerald stretch,
as my culpable ones
diffidently shift.
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Neethi (10 Aug 1990)
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Shyam Balaji 09 April 2009

hey neethi! ! ! ... am born just 2 months before u! ! ! >..counld not understand anything..wot a vocabulary...gr8...pls add oxford dictionary links..! ! ! >...am just a beginner..ur an expert i feel...anyways...read ma poems and comment on them too.! ! ! ...bye.

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Er Dr Pradeep Kumar Mohanty 16 November 2008

Neethi- Which class do u read in? U write so nicely at this tender age. Good Going. Bod bless u.

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