Saturday, December 9, 2006

Bruised Comments

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Your snide comments
Made our kisses taste of irony,
That hard metallic sting.
Gone with soft tenderness
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Elizabeth Kudebeh
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Babak Amou'oghli 09 December 2006

I really liked this poem; the pictures are very strong and touching. It builds up very well to the last 2 lines, which are amazing. I love this part “I miss the boy you once were and hate the man you have become.” It’s very simple yet very sad, a requiem for a lost joy.

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Elizabeth Kudebeh

Elizabeth Kudebeh

Fort Worth, TX
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