Bubbles Poem by Erin Dyas

Bubbles



Take water
Add soap
And
And.. now you have something amazing
Bubbles
They are able to float around
Roam he world
And be free
NO one to tell them
What to do
Who to be
They are free
All the freedom
In the world
To be...
To be...free
Until...
POP
All my dreams
Have gone away
There go all my
Hopes and dreams
Down the drain
POP!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A new take on bubble....kinda
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 04 August 2012

I like it but I don't think you wanted an 'r' in 'Drown' last line. Read mine- Who Am I - Adeline

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