Building Poem by Augustus Carter

Building



A brick to start it all
a wall to shroud it
a few more to surround it
a castle to protect it
a maze to hide it
and some dirt to cover it up.
If you manage to get through the maze
and into the castle
if you manage to tear down the walls
and dig it up
Please stand there and protect it
for it is my heart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rhiannon Scase 25 January 2008

Wow! Great use of metaphors and awesome ending! Another brilliant poem! Rhiannon*

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