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Friday, December 13, 2013

Built On Quicksand Comments

Rating: ★4.5

It's like you died in my arms tonight
In our wondrous bejewelled golden castle built on quick sand
Full of smoke and distorted mirrors
Reflections of light dancing around the rooms mixing with the death and darkness and mildew growing
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Lila Bet

Goodbye

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Khairul Ahsan 13 December 2013

It's wonderful. Deep emotions expressed.9/10.

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