Thursday, November 19, 2015

Buried Alive Comments

Rating: 4.8

I'm in darkness, i'm in stress,
No more windows and no stairs,
I'm so lonely and no more doors,
I'm feeling like a corpse, of course! ! !
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Denis Shmaliy
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Chinedu Dike 19 December 2015

An insightful depiction of depression and life at its lowest ebb, well depicted in the poem. Good piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned in lovely rhyme scheme with conviction. Thanks for sharing Denis. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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