Tuesday, July 5, 2011

Butterfly Feeling Comments

Rating: 5.0

I can't feel that butterflyie feeling anymore
not for u not even for happy thoughts
felt them at one point but never again
not happening now not today not tomorrow not ever
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Alexsandra Henley
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 05 July 2011

Wonderful poem written with great skill. The poem is rich in imagery and style. I am impressed. Well taken. I rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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