Campfire Poem by Carson Tidwell

Campfire

Rating: 5.0


A breeze flicks off a few sparks
from soft-spoken orange tipped coals.
The warmth won't last forever.
But for now, it's not so bad.
Young girl, red hair, cardinal blushed eyes,
rests on his shoulder
Staring up at the white stippled sky.
Humming, twinkle
twinkle little star.
The white specs dance in sync,
a moment so microcosmic.
By daylight, that feeling will fade.
And they will go their separate ways.

Saturday, October 20, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: boy,camping,girl,relaxing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 10 November 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Carson. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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