Saturday, August 17, 2013

Can You See It In My Eyes Comments

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You don’t know how I’m feeling. I have yet to vocalize. You’re the desire burning deep inside me. Can you see it in my eyes?
I tremble when I’m near you. Heat travels up my thighs. And I want you with an urgency that I just cannot describe.
Dare I reach out to touch you? Do you think you’d realize? How much I want & need you? Or can you see it in my eyes? ?
I long to say I love you. But I’m too petrified of your reply. Terrified like a child, I’ve become paralyzed.
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Ryann Blair
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Jason Atkinson 17 August 2013

Very good flow to this poem. And a lot of people can relate. Thanks. God bless

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Khairul Ahsan 17 August 2013

A beautiful poem. Nervous feelings grow when one is deeply in love and is not too sure of the response and reciprocity. These feelings have so nicely been portrayed in this poem, in good rhyme and with good choice of words.

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