quite an array of words that form a perfect picture on exactly what you intended. i particluary liked these lines:
'my vision can be shielded one more day'
and:
'Prescriptions and lessons;
can't feed the hunger that growls'
and this of course, stated so true to image:
It's fierce and deadly;
and has no conscience.
It holds no sympathy;
only feeds on your sickness.'
Great piece of work Deja.
gcs
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quite an array of words that form a perfect picture on exactly what you intended. i particluary liked these lines: 'my vision can be shielded one more day' and: 'Prescriptions and lessons; can't feed the hunger that growls' and this of course, stated so true to image: It's fierce and deadly; and has no conscience. It holds no sympathy; only feeds on your sickness.' Great piece of work Deja. gcs