Wednesday, December 21, 2005

Cancer Comments

Rating: 3.5

Eyes set on addiction;
intense and drawing close.
Searching for my answer;
fighting off this next dose.
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glen still 26 December 2005

quite an array of words that form a perfect picture on exactly what you intended. i particluary liked these lines: 'my vision can be shielded one more day' and: 'Prescriptions and lessons; can't feed the hunger that growls' and this of course, stated so true to image: It's fierce and deadly; and has no conscience. It holds no sympathy; only feeds on your sickness.' Great piece of work Deja. gcs

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