Cancer Took My Aunt Comments
As a small tumor it started,
During her second trimester of labour,
Ooh! my poor uneducated aunt,
She thought it was just a harmless abscess,
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Welcome to PH. OK, your English is not perfect, but I liked how you presented this story and I give you 4 stars. bri : )
Mr. Edwards, your picayune criticisms and bloviating on the poems of others is tedious. What credentials in English, grammar, and English poetry have you earned
Use 'pregnancy', NOT 'labour'; they are very different. Stanza 4, line 2, needs some work.
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2/27/2026 9:50:00 AM # 1.0.0
Very sincere and authentically expressed.