Friday, August 25, 2017

Cant You See It In My Eyes? (Revised) Comments

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You gave me Faith in men again, I can agree
All to take it back from me.
I thought surely this was all a dream
that you'd return someday most certainly.
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Osazee Dankaro 25 August 2017

Quite long, but there are a lot of redeeming qualities to the poem. Keep up the good work.

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LaCicely Nicole

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