Tuesday, March 11, 2008

Capital Pun Is Meant Comments

Rating: 5.0

where is she that knows my mind so well
one in the same in this lonely hell
marks for the con-men, the pawns, the shells
played by ignorance right into this cell
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Sebastien St. Fellmore
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Greenwolfe 1962 31 March 2008

You are good with this rare form of rhyming, I'm impressed as a rhythm and rhyme poet myself. I hope you will compare your work to mine. Anyway, you also know the importance of the beginning. That's impressive as well. Nicely done. Greenwolfe 1962

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