Thursday, February 22, 2018

Cappuccino Of Love Comments

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You will gratify my dairymaid,
while you playfully look from a crib,
Without stingy gifts for the New Year -
one hundred percent - you will tempt me.
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Liza Sud
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Daniel Brick 24 February 2018

WOW, LIZA! ! This is such a wild, untrammeled poem of Passion. But it's exciting rather than boisterous, it's intimate rather than abandoned. It has a pitch perfect tone, and that is one of my highest praises for a poem. It means a poem succeeds as a message and as a work of art. But it leaves me breathless. Let me put it this way: Your poem affirms a very real human happiness, even promises its fulfillment. Yes, that's my response - Y E S

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