Careless Perfection Poem by Daniel Halpern

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Daniel Halpern

Daniel Halpern

Syracuse, New York, United States

Careless Perfection

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According to Lin Yutang,
both Po Chuyi and Su Tungpo
'desperately admired' Tao Yuanming,

a poet of nature who wrote a single love poem,
a poem thought by Chinese dilettantes to be
the one 'blemish in a white jade.'

Can a poet be faulted for calling a woman
carelessly perfect in beauty?
He chose to long for her by envying

the candle that glowed upon her
beautiful face, the shadow
that followed in her every move.

Yet the nature poet Tao Yuanming, at home
with the sudden turning of seasons,
now feared the shadow in darkness,

a discarded fan that once stirred her hair,
feared the candle at dawn. At last believed
that for beauty he had lived in vain.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 10 April 2016

An insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned in poetic diction. Lovely poem that leaves the excited mind of the reader with a phenomenon to ponder. Thanks for sharing Daniel. Please read my poem COLOSSAL MISCARRIAGE OF JUSTICE.

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