Friday, June 6, 2008

Carving Clouds Comments

Rating: 5.0

Where can I go if all I have lies within you
My hopes and dreams and hidden in your heart
If all the world turns against me
I'll hide in your embrace and shut my eyes
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Richard DaSilva
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Kadelia Achille 16 June 2008

Overall I did like this poem but be sure to avoid cliches in your work because it makes it seem less sophisticated than it really is. Cheers!

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