Saturday, November 28, 2015

Cascade (Conflict) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tonight is perfect for staying inside,
but I'm busy contorting my organs.
For instance, my heart and brain love to fight.
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Ratnakar Mandlik 28 November 2015

Beautiful poem with use of lines in first stanza one by one in subsequent stanzas. Enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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