Castle Down To Violet Corn -Field Poem by Maahi Priyanka Raj

Castle Down To Violet Corn -Field

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Castle down to violet corn field

Lo! Life has seized herself at thorny cornfield
Rustle of breeze capturing horrifying atmosphere
Seems like valley of death is leaping in pink sky
Bloody red clouds flying with highest pace
In a strange twilight, gloomy evening is staining
Ancient shrines are hardly visible in dim light
Castles is still far away from my sight
Sunset is setting alike saturating red wine
And I stood at still, on dark grey concrete
To search out new beginning of dawn
In enchanting lavender ambiance beneath the horizon
Far down towards the east, surrounds ebony jungle
A lonely farm girl is looking for her home on the hills
In melancholy situation, missing in violet cornfield
Worried and horrified, impatiently running towards valley


Oh! road to her home is still far, lifting her legs high….
Distance of life is shortening minute by minute
Yearning for her loved ones to meet, exhausted and tired- -
And long bitter night is approaching like death
On other side, running stream is making upsetting noise
Oh! Holy heaven, help me in my journey
Lost in poisonous red -ivy and violet vines
Death is appearing to me alike vampires
Drive me to your pendulous clouds
To reach my castle down to violet corn field!





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Sunday, April 21, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: countryside,innocence,journey,summer time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 23 April 2019

In enchanting lavender ambiance beneath the horizon Far down towards the east, surrounds ebony jungle A lonely farm girl is looking for her home on the hills, horrified, Lost in poisonous red -ivy and violet vines Death is appearing to me alike vampires.. help... you kept me in suspense, what happened to that innocent girl. her innocence=? ? ? beautiful picturesque.. description. very poetic dear poetess. thank u. tony

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Mahi Priyanka Raj 24 April 2019

It is dependent upon sheer dedication of her to reach home. " As where there is will, there is way" Hence proven, despite being afraid, her prayers showed the right way to reach her home/ castle. However I also leave it upon readers to figure out the climax of my poem. It is an open ended poetic tale

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