Thursday, March 29, 2007

Catch Me From The Wind Comments

Rating: 5.0

I feel like a leaf
Blowing through the air
No security or stability
Just blowing anywhere
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Mary Bishop
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Amanda Baines 30 March 2007

I definitely like the poem, but I must agree with Declan, you need to let the emotion through. Plus, you may want to work on the timing a bit.

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Declan McHenry 30 March 2007

A neat and sweet piece Mary but I feel the rhyme constricts the emotion. Thanks for sharing.

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