Friday, July 1, 2011

Celibacy Comments

Rating: 5.0

She said, she is tired of giving it up and not being dated
I said you getting older aren't you?
So of course you? re being dated
I can see the crinkle in her nose by what I just illustrated.
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 01 July 2011

Excellent poem with a very strong structure. Great sentiments and incredible imagery. Voted 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and vote my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Regards Akmal

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