broken soul.. No more


please give me one more night
that's all i ask of you
a chance to watch the moonlight
sitting right beside you
counting all the stars
and wait for one to fall
then i will make a wish
to heal this broken soul

And maybe then i'll have the chance
to show you how i really feel
and it might put me in a trance
coz it might not seem to be real
you'll then look into my eyes
to wipe a dropp of tear
i'll tell you those are not lies
but a feeling ive kept so dear

Poem Submitted: Monday, January 14, 2008
Poem Edited: Monday, January 14, 2008

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  • Roger Cornish (1/14/2008 9:03:00 AM)

    Very nice poem!
    Well done.... I don't mind if they don't rhyme......
    Your Imagery is good enough!

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  • Shannon Wright (1/14/2008 7:58:00 AM)

    Beautiful- one more night... i love it. -shannon

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