Chances Poem by Brian Trujillo

Chances



chances don't always stay embracing
changes is what life is always chasing

try to understand the reason
you've lived inside of me
try to understand the treason
your eyes is all i see

promises don't always stay enchanting
and words can be recanting

so if you have a chance to change
and if you have a glace too strange
you may be just my like me

but if you think, its late to see
or you feel, its hate to mind
then a girl like you is imposible to find

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this poem has a great rhythic flow and rhyme. i liked this poem i liked what you had to say in it. in very few words you said alot. this very nice. life is full of chances, live life to the fullest dont put the chances aside 4 the more chances you take the more life will have for you. i enjoyed this poem. well done. i scored it a ten. amazing job. i loved what you have/ had to say.

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