Changing Ends Poem by Drack Valentine

Changing Ends

Rating: 5.0


As He stood there in the falling rain
His eye's blaring and swelling with the pain
He remembered all the times he had spent
Laughing, smiling, crying and more
Just as she was closing his life's door


So as he stood there in the silent night
His heart stopping and hurting with his plight
He remembered all the times he had spent
Laughing, smiling, crying and more
Before he had even met her and walked through her door.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 23 June 2011

Fantastic poem. Composed well with vivid imagery. Nice sentiments. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Akmal

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