Great work. Short and to the point.
The word choice did not flow to the best of it's ability. For instance you said The characters we play is not what it seems.
What you should have said is The characters we play ARE not what THEY seem.
Overall, great work. Keep it up!
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Great work. Short and to the point. The word choice did not flow to the best of it's ability. For instance you said The characters we play is not what it seems. What you should have said is The characters we play ARE not what THEY seem. Overall, great work. Keep it up!