Characters Poem by White Roses

Characters

Rating: 4.0


The characters we play
is not what it seems
We dot our eyes and mind
our P's and Q's we will
said, 'yes, I'm fine' even though
that's a lie
The characters we play is an
unfortunate event
but hey it's life so put
on your act.
-LT

Monday, December 15, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Samuel Dickerson 15 December 2014

Great work. Short and to the point. The word choice did not flow to the best of it's ability. For instance you said The characters we play is not what it seems. What you should have said is The characters we play ARE not what THEY seem. Overall, great work. Keep it up!

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