Charade Poem by Eloida Capuno

Charade

Rating: 3.0


don't wake me up
when you leave
it won't matter now
i have cried all my tears
pleaded like i never had
nothing more can make you stay

so spare whatever is left of my pride
just go, don't say goodbye
i won't mind
but when you're gone
i will cry some more
because i lied

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny Draper 15 March 2012

Emotional, tragic and very romantic, compact and powerful in balance and structure. Love and pain the obverse sides of a coin we seldem wish to toss. Good piece.

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