Sunday, August 1, 2010

Charming Light From Rod Comments

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This charming rod of light reigns in my heart,
In this heart I crawl formally and enter the realm so desired.
Fitting into my pencil and pen is like agony itself,
Writing may be innocence, but the pen itself gleams.
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Naveed Akram
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Marina Gasbey 01 August 2010

Wow. Short but very expressive and packed with meaning. I would be delighted if you would help me better to understand. The rod of light is a writing utensil? And The charm is what you right? Overall very nice poetry and use of words... Marina Gasbey..

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Naveed Akram

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