Cheap Posada Blues Poem by David Kowalczyk

Cheap Posada Blues

Rating: 4.4


The raucous band playing
in the cantina courtyard
across the street thinks
you're throwing beer bottles
at them from your balcony
only because you have no
bouquets of roses.


They self-destruct throughout
the night, weaving in and out of
your over-easy dreams, until
the next morning, when you awaken
to find yourself on exhibit at
Ripley's Believe It Or Not.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Justin Case 04 January 2008

IMHO, not quite up to snuff with your other work. Something seems to be missing from this poem, but I can't say exactly WHAT.

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David Kowalczyk

David Kowalczyk

Batavia, New York
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