Saturday, April 29, 2006

Chiascuro (On Cleaning The Sistine Chapel Frescoes) Comments

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Ironic that the truth
should be sought
on the shoulder of Eve
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Sojourner Kincaid Rolle
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Martin A. Ramos 29 April 2006

Excellent, Sojourner. What poetry should be: not a comment on the subject but the subject itself: clear, precise and unadorned. I like the three line stanzas and the absence of punctuation. Shows style and technique. What can I say? I wish I had written it. Martin

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