Friday, March 9, 2012

Childhood Memories Comments

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The fondest memories I've ever had
are when I lived with my grandparents, brother, and dad.
Waiting for grandpa to come home from work
to give us mint candy with a sincere smirk.
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Marian Johnson 10 March 2012

thank you so much~ this was a hard one to keep simple, i could have continued on with it forever. this one i hold the closest to my heart.

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Wahab Abdul 09 March 2012

What a poem it is! I like the poem because of its dealing with the theme in a very lucid and simple way, I like your diction, and the way you put the things together, it could have not been better, really you are a talented one, I like attitude too, all these qualities make your poem a beautiful piece of art…I wish you a success in the poetic world, and I like you to read my poems especially ‘’I want to die’’

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